Love, i think its one of the best, if not, the best nature poem i've read. you painted a wonderful picture, with your use of great wording, (as usual i might add, lol.). well, i'm off, enjoy yourself. bye bye

Brad

What a great poem! I think this may be my first about nature poem ive ever read, and I must say, it surprised me in a positive way.

Excellent

Hehe this ones enterd in my contest....

so i will not comment......

YET

ruby

It's so beautiful. it's just...... gorgeous. the imagery uis so pretty but teh words are so dark. amazing....
love suzie

Yes! I agree with everyone about this one.... absolutely beautiful. Amazing imagery. You have such a way with words that no matter what you're writing about, it's as if we're flying... If you know what I mean... Honestly I'm not quite sure what that meant but take it as a compliment ;) lol. Thats how I feel when I read your poems, especially this one.
Sarah-Joy