That was great Amanda! I like how you write with meaning but it usually doesnt rhyme. I like that alot! GrEaT jOb!!

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Always4You

WOW........great job on that one
Really Good..
your expression of the way he makes you feel..was really good
keep it up
5/5
~MF~-

Liked it...Wow...I wnjoy your writings...Keep it up....check out my poems and let me know....thank you for sharing your deepest thoughts.

Ohhh...that's good one! You expressed with it how to love a person..yeah..you will do everything only to let him know the love you tend for him...isn't it?

Very good job...Very Visual Poem..makes you See what you are talking aout...enjoyable read...keep up the good work....5/5 vote and comment on my latest poems "Gifts Of Sorrow" "Arabian Sands" "My Tears"