Very nice poem.....im most likely to be the girl sometimes but ya..its all good neways nice poem keep up the good work

Good job. I really liked this poem alot. It was sad yet thats what type of poetry Im into. You use words and emotions lovily. Check out mine sometime. I need so people to check out mine one of these days. =) Great Job! *two thumbs up*

WOW DID THIS REALLY HAPPEN? IM GUESSING PART OF IT DID

WOW DID THIS REALLY HAPPEN? IM GUESSING PART OF IT DID

WOW DID THIS REALLY HAPPEN? IM GUESSING PART OF IT DID

Omg i love that
im in a bad relationship and i can see my friends writting something like this
now things are going to change
thanku so much
5/5

This is another nice poem! i am thinking it was true, cos the feelings of turture was strong in here! keep it up!

'oly fcuking shti!!!
this is an awsom poem.........
5/5 for sure!!!!!
i love the ending and the beginning...
especially the part of "she deserved it" right at the end cos my dad has said tht to me.. nice