by Michael D Nalley May 12, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
If we could express what we feel with 'language art' |
by David Moss
Very well penned - 5/5 continues.... |
by Sean Allen
"Would our sacred soul savor what our |
by Catherine
It is a good poem, but it doesn't really make much sense. |
by Natalie
This was different, But interesting. Really good poem. The flow was okay, And the rhyme scheme was good. Had a good message behind it. Writing feelings. Another 5/5 It was great, Nothing bad I can say about it. |
This piece is fantastic, the concept is brilliant and well implemented. i really don't feel worthy to comment upon it, and it is defiantly out of my league for any real critic, but just thought I’d leave a comment to say that I think this is defiantly one of the best pieces I have ever read on this site. |