This poem was inspired by a PM from a PQ member

This piece is fantastic, the concept is brilliant and well implemented. i really don't feel worthy to comment upon it, and it is defiantly out of my league for any real critic, but just thought I’d leave a comment to say that I think this is defiantly one of the best pieces I have ever read on this site.

This was different, But interesting. Really good poem. The flow was okay, And the rhyme scheme was good. Had a good message behind it. Writing feelings. Another 5/5 It was great, Nothing bad I can say about it.

`taleee

It is a good poem, but it doesn't really make much sense.

"Would our sacred soul savor what our
"If we could express what we feel with language art"
I feel like language-art should be hypenated.. it feels like a phrase
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heart would surly sing "
I think you meant 'surely' instead of 'surly'.
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I liked the poem, I thought it was thought provoking, especially the question posed in the second to last line.

Very well penned - 5/5 continues....
-DM