Prisoner to You

by Bridgette   May 12, 2006


Blurred vision from the tears I've cried
I can't see anything clearly anymore
I keep pushing my emotions aside
Because I can't take much more

Tensing up at just the sight of you
Remembering all of the memories past
Thinking of everything we've been through
And how it was all ended so fast

Darkness consumes my soul
As I keep trying to block you out
My heart is no longer whole
And pain is what my life's about

Indescribable feelings locked away
No rest for me again tonight
Maybe I'll be better another day
As my feelings for you I still fight

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    You should smile more if this is true. It was good but too me it could have gone into more emotional detail instead of just telling us. But it was a really well written poem with good power and a lot of sadness which is key for writing a real sad poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, well written thoughout with some very powerful expressions and good word choice.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Once again, good format, good rhyming. all together, a good peom. again, surely something that every one has experienced in their life, giving them something to relate to on their own. level. you're an amazing writer, keep it up... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Pepa

    That's a great poem. i really enjoyed it. you spoke everything I'm feeling right now.....it's so hard!

    Pepa

  • 18 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Once again, a good good poem

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