by firexflys May 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Lost with words when I'm looking in your eyes |
Very touching piece!!! The rhyme and the flow went very well!!! Amazing!! wouldnt change a thing!! Perfect!!5/5!! |
Amazing...5.5 loved the rhyme |
by dora
Hey darl a t0uching piece very well written l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. very heartfelt keep it up!! |