I hope...I die

by BittersweetDecay   May 12, 2006


I hope

Hoping that someday u\'ll rescue my frozen soul;
Put out these sharp feelings that burn like coal....
I cry.

Crying over my shimmering angel at night
Don\'t u dare to just watch me how i stop my fight!
I lose.

Losing control over my tormented body...
I\'m abandoned and brainwashed in a place so muddy
I crawl.

Crawling away from ur dark temptations\
U\'ve all torn me apart with ur \"good\" intentions
I run.

Running from the wall of ice inside me
The human part of my being needs to be free
I feel.

Feeling and wondering to much about what\'s outside
I try to make u care about what\'s inside
I scream.

Screaming more when u\'re bitter and senseless
Just touch my skin and I\'ll know u\'re heartless
I lie.

Lying that I feel so warm and fulfilled
Still laying down in misery with my emotions killed
I die.

*i saw this structure of poem in other poem on this site and i really liked it and decided to write one in the same form...I hope the one that wrote the other one won\'t be angry..if so,announce me...srry :-(*

~© by Andra - thanks 4 looking~

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