Awesme poem...loved it...it realy waz...i feel lyk dat 2 sumtmes...so i cn totly relate...keep it up....5/5....check out mi poems plez nd leav commnts...lov tah get feedbck...

I love it!

I loved your poem! i especially liked the last part:
Pretty little girl
Why do you care
If they like you or not
Don't you see the way they stare?

Some day you'l be loved
And someday the tears will dry
Some day you'l be noticed
And no longer have the question why

Your poem is really inspiring! I loved your choice of words.. And that your've rhymed the second and forth line of every stanza! and it's not the kind of rhyming that is forced.. it's the kind that is very originale!
I hope to see more of your poems!
keep up the wonderful work..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]