Its and interesting poem, i like it

See this was very simple tho beautiful..i loved it..

Thats really really good, i like your use of repitition

Very nice. Though in the 4th stanza, where you have life is coming back to life, you might consider changing it to "the world is coming bakc to life" or something like that.

good work.

Very good! i like it

I havent read a poem like that in a while. it was really good keep it up 5/5
dee

Wow nice job!!! I really liked the last part!! I like rain...this poem really made me think!

If u like my poem rain u well like my poem willow tree....thanks for the comments...

love u
jacob montgomery is my gaurdian angel

Wow this is so good. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Wow this is so good. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Wow this is so good. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Wow this is so good. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Wow this is so good. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Nice poem...im feeling kinda down right now so i cant think of anything to say...im glad your dreams come true.

Another great poem..keep it up...5/5
Xox Laura Marie aka Sweets

That is an awsome poem. Im gonna add u to my favorites k

Very nice every one love rain.
when it shower it give new life to every one.
5/5

Gave it a 5 actually.. :) very nice change of pace, cool that you can use diferent metaphors to explain your feelings.

I love this! The rain is such a beautiful thing and you've expressed that well here=)

Hmm, that was very interesting. I liked it very much. Nice job. I hope to read more.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5