Nice one... i like the last stanza... i felt it...

Wow. Excellent write. 5/5

when the rain falls
my dreams come true
to be kissed in the falling rain
to be held and picked up by my true love.

Loved that part. Mmhm.

xx.Nohting-Gold-Can-Stay.xx

All is so quit
((quiet))
no children are crying.
((I loved this line...))

Great poem about nature... I don't know, but I could just tell it was written by you because of the way the it was written..which is a good thing... Nothing much to say here, either.. I really enjoyed it. That's it. =]

xDarkSuicidex 5.5