Beautiful

Very lovely my dear. 5/5......but i kinda got confussed in the middle....but thats jus me. mwahz love ya.

takecare
nami

I think you deserve to be on my favourites. I really like your work. It's so good. I loved this poem too. Short lines, But really powerfull. You have talent. Keep writing! 5/5

`taleee xx