Following Mistakes

by Love Fallacy   May 13, 2006


When I did something wrong,
Youd follow all along.
I brought you down with me,
I was blind to see.

Id love you all the time,
And think that things were fine.
But really you had pain,
Your feelings werent the same.

Now I cry everyday,
Cause you have gone away.
I just want to die,
Youve found another guy.

I am all alone,
You never call my phone.
Ive cried so many tears,
This was my biggest fear.

With nothing left to do,
I've turned my back on you.
Now a man that is free,
Since you walked out on me.

I'll find another girl,
A million in this world.
Forever goodbye to you,
Are love it wasn't true.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    A good write.
    The poem flowed well, and the rymthe's where great. Although Stanza 3's flow was a little off and didn't rymthe. But the peice was still well done.
    I could feel the emotion's surging through the words, making for a great read.

    'I'll find another girl,
    A million in this world.
    Forever goodbye to you,
    Are love it wasn't true.'

    ^ A perfect ending. I absolutly loved it.

    Elaine.

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