A good write.
The poem flowed well, and the rymthe's where great. Although Stanza 3's flow was a little off and didn't rymthe. But the peice was still well done.
I could feel the emotion's surging through the words, making for a great read.

'I'll find another girl,
A million in this world.
Forever goodbye to you,
Are love it wasn't true.'

^ A perfect ending. I absolutly loved it.

Elaine.