Comments : Tangled Thoughts

  • 18 years ago

    by Arti

    Hi..Wats making your thoughts so tangled? if you want someone to talk to, cry on, jus lemme know...feel free to email me
    Its a very descriptive poem - I like the style. It would have been nicer I think to use inversions - they make sad poems so much more eloquent.
    Arti.