This was good, But I think it would be better if you went deeper. It felt like I was wanted more. But it ended. So maybe if you worked on it a little more, It'd be awesome.

`taleee

Haha we did great doug:)

I think i'm going to put this up on my poems too..because i love it so much..we did a good job really we did..and i might even try to go a little deaper with it!!