Through your eyes

by Unrequited   May 13, 2006


Through this life, i see cold stars in your eyes. i can feel your poison sting my insides. in your eyes, i see all hope fade... away. into the midst, we are nothing.

feel my eyes gaze upon your heart, suffering. hear my cries reach out to you, so lost in time. see your eyes, lost in the gray of my skies... frozen. one last breath, silence resides.

through this life, i see the love screaming. in your eyes, all good is now bleeding. watch you die, as you whisper your heart to me... goodbye. in my eyes, your love resides.

crashing thunder
rolling waves
earthquakes shatter
there's no one to save

it is this world's time; a time for an end.
all i wanted was your heart
but instead, i'm breaking apart.

through this life, let me die with you inside. bled to death, no more does silence keep me alive. through your eyes, you whisper one last goodbye... falling. into the midst, we are now nothing.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Sounds like it could be a song or something like that. For a poem the flow did have some flaws but loved the words and wording and how great the imagery was. It described things so well. Nice job for that. The ending was really, exceptionally strong.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was good.. the descriptions were really powerful and you used great words to describe them! but the flow was a little off again..

    bled to death
    ^ should be "bleed" not "bled"

    nice job, ill give it a 4/5!

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