by chelyxbaby28 May 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
To feel so safe, to hear your heart, to feel you soft warm breath, to feel your body close to me, to be held against your chest. to be so close to feel your arms, wrapped around me tight, to hear you whisper, to smell your scent, every things alright. to feel your hands holding me, knowing that you care, to have your head pressed to me, to feel your short soft hair. to know you love me, to know its true, to know you'll always stay, to know you see that i love you, to know you'll never go away. to do all these things would be so great, to know and feel and see, that everything would be perfect, if you could just hug me. |
Very good poem. Filled with so much emotions. Good rhyming in parts. |
Hey thats a really good feeling the emotion is amazing:D:D*thumbs up* your really good. I also read some of your other poems and there great as well |