Love you and Thank-You

by Jonathan Blair   May 13, 2006


Fear is how I fall
My head against the wall
Confusing what is real
This pain I feel
My walls are closing in
I never want to feel this again
I found you
You helped me through
The pain passed
I knew it wouldn't last
I knew it for a fact
The mentality I lacked
It put me down,
made me frown.
You gave me strength
Made me go the length
I love you,
And also Thank-You

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cheris Blair

    Hey jonan great poem...lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Denise

    I think t his one is really nice..good job..and yes all of the things in my poem are true believe it or not

  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Eh... You don't want my thoughts on this one.

  • 19 years ago

    by jenelle

    It's really good I liked it alot

  • 19 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Jonathan, this was a good attempt for the first poem on your list. It was somewhat emotive and well expressed. Although, I am not too keen on the structure of the poem. You are not fully creating an atmosphere; rather, you are taking it a step by step approach; which in some cases is OK. For improvement: Try and build a story to the poem, that way the reader is fully concentrating on each individual thought you express.
    Overall, well done and keep writing =]

    Much love and God bless,
    Fallen.

    P.S: I think you listen to a LOT of Linkin Park. I'd try and stay away from certain lyrics. =]

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