Forget tomorrow

by Topshop princess   May 13, 2006


A knife in my back,
A slit to my wrist
How could i let it come to this
How come you ran and left me behind
Why do they say things so unkind
why do i pass by each day
wishing and hoping to fade away?
Suddenly why do i feel so small
I feel so empty like nothing at all
i wish you'd have taken me by the hand
Take me away like we'd always planned
But you took the blade before i could follow
Now im still here
Wishing away tommorow...

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  • 17 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    That poem was amazing! So much meaning to it! Keep it up xx

  • 17 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Hello just replying to the post. For this poem I like more of the middle and ending not so much of the beginning. The part I am mentioning starts with "Suddenly why do i feel so small" After this as well you can write I know a good poem because it has all the elements and the tone to go on better. With it there will be more feeling, and I think it would be great as I have mentioned lol. So good start and keep it going!

  • 18 years ago

    by ALLEN CEM

    VERY DEEP NICELY WRITTEN SHOR AND EMOTIONAL I LIKE IT ......

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacey

    Ohh that was good. the only bit where the flow gets a little funny is "How come you ran, left me so far behind". i reckon itd sound better as "How come you ran, and left me behind". But thats just my opinion.

    yeah but all in all, that was a really great poem. keep writing! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow...I loved it!
    It was so sad and filled with emotion, i enjoyed the wording and imagery and flow.
    Good job.

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