Wow...I loved it!
It was so sad and filled with emotion, i enjoyed the wording and imagery and flow.
Good job.

Ohh that was good. the only bit where the flow gets a little funny is "How come you ran, left me so far behind". i reckon itd sound better as "How come you ran, and left me behind". But thats just my opinion.

yeah but all in all, that was a really great poem. keep writing! :)

VERY DEEP NICELY WRITTEN SHOR AND EMOTIONAL I LIKE IT ......

Hello just replying to the post. For this poem I like more of the middle and ending not so much of the beginning. The part I am mentioning starts with "Suddenly why do i feel so small" After this as well you can write I know a good poem because it has all the elements and the tone to go on better. With it there will be more feeling, and I think it would be great as I have mentioned lol. So good start and keep it going!

That poem was amazing! So much meaning to it! Keep it up xx