Journey Rain

A really deep powerful poem with an almost fantasy-esque feel to it. I really liked the use of imagery and progression that helped the reader to feel as if they are being taken upon the journey with the writer. Really great stuff. 5/5 x

This was really good I found reading this like a mini quest and as you laid out the decisions that life throws at us it made a lot of sense. It had an enchanting feel to it ...

[lost_laureate - come find me]

I liked this alot. As I was reading, I could really picture what you were saying in my head. So you did an awesome job on this one. The flow was great, Rhyming good. Everything was awesome. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

For some reason my comment was cut off. I don't know why but I was meaning to say that your poem holds really powerful imagery to it. I wish I knew how my review was cut off because there was much more I wanted to say.

Your poem was first really deep, or maybe that's just the way I took it.
The two paths emerges.