Comments : Caving desires

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I really really really like this.. I didn't think I would (sorry :-) ), but it conveys my feelings at the moment, and I felt what you were saying. I normally like tidy, neat poems, and yet the disarrayed order of your lines added to the torment of being so let down.. It's really fantastic. Well done. Thank you. xx