Wow this is really good.. I definitely agree with it. You expressed your views and thoughts well and it's really something to make you think. Great job on this!

WOW....this is so cleverly done I am guessing it was based on the declaration of independence or something...I loved the way you took this constitution apart. It was a bvery honest and highly intellectual yet sceptical poem to read. Really exposed some of the faults in America drew in some great historical context.

Unique to read....excellent.

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Hmm. Lol. I don't agree with some of the things you say, because I wear the flag on my arm on a daily basis. But I do on the other hand. I admire your realism, and I like your style. How you took symbols from the pledge of allegance and put them into the begning of your stanzas. 5/5 for being true and unique. Can you comment on mine called fatigued eyes?

Wow very good! that was very unique, and you could tell there was a lot of thought put into it! very good! 5/5
jessy

Wicked! Excellent insight into the hypocrysy...
love and light

Wow, this was an awesome poem! that format was really something original. props to you!

Wow, this was an awesome poem! that format was really something original. props to you!

I am absolutely speechless... There is nothing I can say to you that would show you the magnitude of what this poem said to me. Every line, every word, every syllable spoke out. The way you put the words so cleverly together. Something that could easily be said to an audience as a speech became a piece of artwork. Completely original. Something i have never seen on this world wide web before and God only knows I look for originality. You spoke so powerfully and I could not help but be engulfed into the words. No words will suffice to tell you how wonderfully this poem was written.

a million/5 if i could.