Nicely written, if it was a wee-bit longer it wouldnt hurt but still an excellent poem and so true 5/5

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Wow MElissa, I eally realte tot hat one....i loved it...wonderful words...so true...you write beautifully

Very wel done, saying sorry indeed makes huge differences, well written

What an great poem!
its so true!
if ppl did wat u sed our world would b so much better!
keep writting
much love mary

A very strongly written poem! Your truly amazing! I like these lines the best

Everyone has and will make mistakes
Its part of a relationship to give and take

They gave me that breath taking reaction!

Very true. Saying sorry is the hardest thing to do, because most people don't like to admit they are wrong. That is why arguements happen and fights breakout. Very good topic and a great write. Keep it up!

Very true. Good words esp. right now for me. It isnt easy but it needs saying. What a great topic for a poem. I am only sorry I didnt read this sooner. Simply and wonderfully put...

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Good write. Short, simple and sweet yet inspiring. Keep up the good work! 5/5

This is really good.. It's definitely something everyone can get a little inspiration from. The flow & rhythm of it was really good & didn't seem at all forced. Great job on this.

Wow. Amazing job!! Short and to the point.

Ah-Ha..Short but so true.. I like it.. Great Job ♥

I love the point you made. It's very true. Wouldn't it be such a nicer world if more people would just say sorry once in a while.

Good work x

I remembr readin this..gr8 work 5/5 very tru...

IT seemed unfinished.
Thats just my point of view i guess.
4/5
but still many people seemed to love it.
keep goin'
~Emma

I like the idea, I really do. However, I think it could use some work. It seems in several places you sacrificed meaning for rhyme, like in the last line. Also the whole poem sounds choppy. Maybe make it a little longer, and incorporate more poetic and figurative language. Nice try, with some fine tuning it could be a great poem.

I love how this poem is true and down to earth, one of a kind. im goin through a situation like this right now, great write. 5/5
Driver

Good poem, short but gets to the point! And I agree, people dont say sorry enough! Good job 5/5

Nice job ~ I like the topic!