by GR33N3Y3DB3AUTY May 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I cry when your on my mind |
I know exactly how it feels...i am absolutely in love with this guy...and I just keep getting my heart broken and then a month later he'll call and of course i give him another chance and we try again only to get my heart broken....but i may be stupid...but I love him |
by Synh
This poem was good but should've been longer. But, yeah, hey I felt the same way like all freshman year (I'm soph now, gonna be a junior June 6th, 12:00 p.m. :D ) |
by Tara Kay
Well, that poem was good and it was true, and real. because many people give there parthner's/boyfreiends second chances when they shouldnt but only because of the love they have for them. |
by Brigitte
Awe I felt like this at the beginning of the year... I like the poem because of the wording and because I can relate. My only idea's for your poem are that you don't get carried away with discriptive words.... It throws the flow of the poem off |
by rae
I knwo how you felt in this poem the same way i feel now |