"i remember the smiles and the trials.

i feel Ive walked a million miles."

I adored this part a nice little prhase in there. Watch out for spelling I think you meant "whether" towards the end. Look out for some punctuation...apart from that it was a joy to read...

:0)

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Its a simply adorable poem...I LoVe it lol