You guys do realie good together =]

Loving you this way
On such a night
Valiant kisses
In the dark
Nude you are
Guiding me to the floor

^wow an amzing way of beginnin the poem. very imagine. could see that going through my mind. flow is great here

You know how to work me
On the floor I go
Until the morning

^oh wow nice words u choose here. wow!

This will not stop
Holding each other
In the darkness of the night
Scents of you

^very beautiful i like this part. scent of you says a lot to me. wnt change a thing.

Wondering throughout
Another day is
Yet to come, until then lets make love

^nice way of closin your poem here. once again another amazing job. do keep it up!!!

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

5/5
TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Im sry... im so dumb. i read sumthin so rong. i thought u rote this with another person. n sry with the other poem. but both are truly amazing.
sry bout the confusion here n with the other.