Comments : Broken And Shattered

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    All i have to say is WOW...great poem i give u a 5=P umm...the only thing was that long part(last 4 lines) i had to read it a few times...didnt make that much sense i think i got it but i dunno...

  • 18 years ago

    by OhhBabyyGiirl

    The last lines were meant to say- that the girl was unhappy, she was depressed. but then he came into her life, and made her happy, but now that he is leaving she wants him to look at her grave and see how him leaving made her die.