Really good. Loved the flow and the picture you paint...

Godbless
Sammib

Very nice. it was a clear and clever poem. the rhymes you used were good, and it flowed very well. i really enjoyed reading the poem. the length of the lines gave you more room to express yourself, but they were not all equal. this didnt take to much off the overall effect of the poem though

good work!!!

Ruby

Very good. I can really feel it. Keep it up.

Very good. I can really feel it. Keep it up.

Very nice
keep it up