Hey Sweety I sense a strange honesty , sincerity in your poem.lot of pain indeed.your poems r true reflections of your emotions.A fine written poem Indeed.Regards Ankit

Omgg.. this was amazingg! it is so true.. and heartfelt.. i truly loved it! the metaphors and descriptions you used were beautiful and the ideas that were put into this poem were excellent..

A no-hoper realized there was a hope
^whats a "no-hoper" .. hehe

A person in hospital got over
^a person gets over what?

A new flower grew up health
^should be "healthy"

excellent write! 5/5