Heart Break (for a contest)

by lonelynow   May 14, 2006


Pushing myself to the limit
Hurting myself some more
It's not because Ana left me
That my heart is sore

Heart broken; heart broken
That's all I can feel
How can I miss
Someone who wasn't real?

I'm not an angel
I'm not a butterfly
If I was then why would you
Leave me here to die?

With you I'm diseased
Without you I'll die
I need you here within me
To smile or to cry

I cannot be real
I am a fake
I don't exist
I have no heartache

Ever since you left me
I've felt empty inside
The day that you left me
Was the day that I died

You push me to the limit
Always hurting me more
I think it's because Ana left me
That my heart is sore

*This poem is about me losing Ana and becoming EDNOS with Ana tendancies. I still have an ED, I just have one which isn't supposedly a "proper ED". One day I shall be Ana again..*

*please please comment and vote--I'll return the favor as usual*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Delie

    I'm sorry about the stupid comment i leftbefore, as soon as i read one of your other poems i clued in that Ana was Anorexia...duhh!
    well, good work! Love it!
    and i googled EDNOS, so now i know what it means...

    KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING,
    Delie

  • 18 years ago

    by Delie

    It was really good i liked it...i'm a little confused because i don't know who ana is and wat an EDNOS is...
    if i'm correct an ED is and EATING DISORER, right?

    bt enough about that...i really like your poem, was really good...
    i'm about to check ur other ones about Ana...

    Delie

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I think it is a excellent poem. Very good rhythm and your words were so powerful yet so meek(if that makes any sense)...well overall it was an great so I gave you a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I really like your poetry, and it's so dark, yet honest, and you write your emotions so clearly, but I'm really sorry, I have to ask; What is Ana and EDNOS? I just have no idea, so it's hard to fully comprehend the enormity of your poetry.. I gather it's a Special Need of some kind, and please forgive me for my ignorance, but maybe it's called something else here in the UK..? I still gave you 5/5, though.. lol.. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. it seem that u had mix feelings. both anery and sad. very good rythme. i like it. keep writing:)

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