Comments : Heart Break (for a contest)

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    That's very sad but also very pretty. I enjoyed it, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. it seem that u had mix feelings. both anery and sad. very good rythme. i like it. keep writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I really like your poetry, and it's so dark, yet honest, and you write your emotions so clearly, but I'm really sorry, I have to ask; What is Ana and EDNOS? I just have no idea, so it's hard to fully comprehend the enormity of your poetry.. I gather it's a Special Need of some kind, and please forgive me for my ignorance, but maybe it's called something else here in the UK..? I still gave you 5/5, though.. lol.. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I think it is a excellent poem. Very good rhythm and your words were so powerful yet so meek(if that makes any sense)...well overall it was an great so I gave you a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Delie

    It was really good i liked it...i'm a little confused because i don't know who ana is and wat an EDNOS is...
    if i'm correct an ED is and EATING DISORER, right?

    bt enough about that...i really like your poem, was really good...
    i'm about to check ur other ones about Ana...

    Delie

  • 18 years ago

    by Delie

    I'm sorry about the stupid comment i leftbefore, as soon as i read one of your other poems i clued in that Ana was Anorexia...duhh!
    well, good work! Love it!
    and i googled EDNOS, so now i know what it means...

    KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING,
    Delie