Comments : Untitled 2

  • 18 years ago

    by norman

    Ever hear of somone going back in time and killing a butterfly and it changing the whole futur. well its posable to happen. so what you do will affect the futer and the lives of others.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow. I can totally relate to this. It's possibly one the worst feelings ever. It's heart wrenching. I like the flow of this poem and how you express yourself. Well done!
    Thanks for your comments on my poems. I appreciate them, but I'm afraid I don't think they are very good. However, I don't see how you don't think your work is good, it's wonderful! Very refreshing. You have an amazing talent. =)
    I like how you name your poems like "Untitled 1.. 2.. 3" and so on. Very nice! Sort of gives it a sense of mystery.
    Well that's all for now... I hope to get to know you better (cause you actually seem like a cool guy) and read more of your GREAT poems!
    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy