I am sorry you are in so much pain, I feel for you in myheart..because I have done the same thing to the one I truly love, and its killing me inside. Guess I got what was coming to me. Timothy r

I am sorry you are in so much pain, I feel for you in myheart..because I have done the same thing to the one I truly love, and its killing me inside. Guess I got what was coming to me. Timothy r

Hey hun this sounded like it came stright from your heart and it probably did. Nice write. Keep your head up..

Dear, i'm sorry if you feel this way, keep you head up high, be strong, you know life's like a cloud, and this way i've had many times before, anyway i wish everything well with you, keep smiling whatever, and be safe, bert.

Wow!! Excellent write!!! Im sorry if you feel this way!! It seemed like it came right from the heart wich always makes the best poems!! Keep it up!!! 5/5

Hey this poem ir really good i was in the middle of wrightin a poem but i looked at urs and it much sumed it up im sorry a guy treated u like this i know what it fells like i hope ur ok

Wow.. there was so much emotion in this poem, it was truly powerful and breathtaking! keep it up!
jessy xox

I love your poem. It is fantastic!!! Keep writing as good as that and you could make a poem book.

Awww that's such a sad poem. Respect is like glass, once it's broken, it's hard to put the pieces back together again.
I know how you feel, chin up.

An emotive write. I liked the second stanza, good choice of words in that stanza especially. However, on the first line of the second stanza, it should be "your."
Why not check my article on "homophones" (words like you're and your) it may help.
I liked how you have a bit of hope to the last stanza, it gave a nice ending.
Good job, I enjoyed the read.

This is a very good poem, much emotions involved, raw. Greatly written, great format once again. A subject i'm sure many can relate to on their own level, i know i can. great job 5/5

Very expressive strong peice of writing, the content is clear and powerful with some great expresion and the structure and flow very good.

though everyone else seems to like the 2nd stanza i found it slightly weaker than the rest, it's final line seems to disrupt the flow slightly. but as others praised you upon it I am not sure if this may just be the way i read things or something...

anyway great peice.

5/5

You are such a good poet. Your poems always contain such great language. I really like them!

Nice poem....it's nicely worded also. Keep up the great work! Hope everything goes okay for you. GBU!
Pepa

I'm sorry that you had to endure that kind of pain. No one should have to go through that. There are a lot of emotions in this writing and its very good. Keep up the good work.