CUTE!

Itss cutee x

This is good not ur best work but it is i think ur first peom and it is good well written short and ot the point good job

keenan

Very short but still powerful. I like atmosphere of this piece, you created it with just a few words. You described emotions strongly. 5/5

Hmm yeah it was pretty good but im not yet satisfied. it short but sweet though...
but anyway,, i have to read some more....