The long road...

by Dennise   May 14, 2006


My feet hurt...my head aches...it seems like a lifetime since ive seen heaven...i walk across the stones, they cut my feet...the thought of you is what keeps me from calling defeat...i put one foot in front of the other with faith as my destiny...i look up to the sky and pray that someone up there is listening...you dont know me..i dont know you..but ive heard stories and legends which i hope are true...of a bond so strong clear and pure..they say that in you there is the gift of promise...that when they meet you its a moment to always cherish...that when left without you many have perished...and so i will walk...forever if i have to...in hopes of meeting you someday... this thing they call, Love...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unforbidden

    This poem is awsome.. and i like the way u put that on my poem.. that is a good way of wording it...lol.. but very good poem.. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    That's a wonderfull way of describing the hope for love,
    pain and hope and the strenght to go on ,
    seems more like a little story about the desire for love no?
    you can feel the emotion and desire in it
    really good, like it alot

  • 18 years ago

    by Katherine

    Good poem. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sugar

    Nice