I'm going through a rough time too at the moment but nothing to do with food. This poem felt more like a narrative which made the point come across easily.

Wow this is really good... and I can relate to it. You did a great job on this. The flow & rhythm of it was great. I loved it. Stay strong & take care!

I really liked it. I'm also going through a tough time. Hang in there! The poem was really good!

Aww hunni, if you losed anymore weight you will disappear into the thin air, I am really worried about you now. You always told me that this wasn't the right way, so I am telling you now...Losing weight won't mean losing your problems, we just have to face them, instead of finding new ways to hurt ourselves...I hope you soon get this under control, cause you are so thin,/skinny that you can't lose weight before your body will breaks down. Talk to me, I am here, always hunni. I love you and I will always have you close to my heart!!!

I like the flow of this poem and how you started off the poem. You painted a vivid picture for your readers and still managed to keep the rhythm going. Great job! 5/5

This is really good. i loved it!

Wow... good job gurl! although it brings up depressing thoughts and makes me worry about you, it still has really good rythme and flow to it.. keep em coming..

**meggie**

This is a good poem, good flow and structure. paints the picture very well at the start and shows very clearly that ur going through tough times. it would be a shame for you to waste this talent while you waste away. dont die..

Nice work,, i know exactly what your going threw.. if you ever need someone to talk to feel free to send me a message...

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Aw sweetie

i went through the same thing a little while ago
good luck
email me if you need anything
xxxx