Cultural Symmetry

Great poem, more of an outlook on how poetry is i'd say. Great though none the less.

I'm bored of writing poetry,
engulfed in all my cries.
I have to step into reality,
where my poetic talent lies.

Was a great stanza. Great way to start it off. 5/5

~Caught in this pain again~
~*Bryce Dressler*~

Love the third stanza, it describes poetry well. KEep it up

Wow that was gr8. i thot it was very clear, loved it. 5/5

I think its great. WRite abou tht ewriting process? why not. You should know all about it by now. I loved that. I hated the rhyme scheme. I personally couldn't stand it. Thought it hindered the poem, dragging it down far below what it is worth and didn't allow you to state everything you might have wanted as clearly and concisely as you wanted. I think you could turn it into a pro rate job if you shredded your rhymes and just wrote the same thing with much of the same words and ides in a paragraph form.

First of all i have to say amazing stanza.. it was definitly my fav

I'm bored of writing poetry,
engulfed in all my cries.
I have to step into reality,
where my poetic talent lies.

2nd of all the rhyme was great, and the flow went along nicely great work keep it up !! 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*