That was good i like it that it rymed....i never seen a guy with this much talet....

This was very good, not your best but then again i'm not one for love poems. It had a strong sense of yearning and i loved the question mark at the end just put the icing on the cake. Great
Sondos

Wow That Is Good I Rated It A 5!! much luv! -Ashley

Aww.. very good.. you have a talent, dont let it go to waste! keep up the good work!
jessy xox