by Sondos May 14, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Asbestos eyes and death breathe mist |
by LadyPearl
Wow, breathless poem. Wonderful first stanza. |
O.O |
by shobhana kumar
Sondos!! what can i say that i have not saud before. Bob Shank and Kaylee are right. You are one of the best on this site. |
by Bridgette
Wow that poem was really good.. The description of this was really well and The flow and rhythm of this was perfect. You have an amazing way with words, you are very talented! Keep it up! |
by Sondos
Thank you for all of your comments. For Cory Mastrandrea, thank you for your suggestion, I have added in an extra stanza near the end. Hope its okay |