That was good!!!really good! i liked it all, nice job!! don't stop...

That is really good ... i like your style and i totally understand the pain of what you wrote about here ... keep up the good work
Ashleigh xx

So it took so long for me to get back to you, my server has been down but anywayz I really liked your poem especially since its so relatable to me, so I gave it a 5/5. And thnx so much for reading and comenting on my poem I'll definetly keep you advice in mind Toodaloo! ;}