by Dennise May 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Here we are...the moment has finaly come...where words are crucial, actions a must...my heart is crying i cant seem to breath...you look at me and hold me your scent is so sweet...i take it all in while i close my eyes i want to remember this moment always when time goes by...im shaking or is it you...i hold your face i need to see the truth...our eyes are locked we cant look away...i hold on tighter i need your strength...the clock is ticking what am i to do...ive been in heaven and ive been threw hell and finaly i found you only to have you no more...oh God the reality is setting in...i cant believe this is happening it all has to be a bad dream...WAKE ME, HIT ME, SCREAM MY NAME, im out of control there's just too much pain...go ...leave me...please walk away...i dont know how to say goodbye without going insane... I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU...remember me for this...i am the one waiting...you are my only wish... |
by Ariana
This is a well-written piece. Usually I shy away from un-formatted pieces but your words captured me, they sound very heartfelt and they seem to come from experience. Very touching, keep it up :) |