Last kiss

by BittersweetDecay   May 14, 2006


Pure white dress and black silky hair
Trembling looks and hazel eyes that stare
She is laying at the edge of a cliff
Ready to give up everything..feeling so stiff

Her tears could darken the brightest rays
And frozen pieces of the sun for days and days
The story of her life is slowly passing by
Her lips are dry as she tries to scream: "why?"

Looking down...she sees the infinite abyss
As she is thinking of his last icy kiss
All the memories they had together..dreams..
Then the painful period covered with screams

She moans her emotion,his eyes,her being
His embrace,her love,his soul meaning
Her giddiness grew thinking off all this
Touching the edge...still the pain won't cease

Her numb face is drowned in farewell tears
Her mind is spinning...she can't see clear
This is the final step...she falls so deep
Bloody white dress...but nobody there to weep...

~© by Andra - thanks 4 looking~

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  • 18 years ago

    by BittersweetDecay

    Thanks so much 4 the comments..it means a lot to me...and also 4 the votes. I'm sry 4 the mistakes,it was kinda late and also,english is not my native language. Thx again 4 everything. Lotsa love 4 all of u

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Amazing poetry! I Really liked this one... It had a rocky start but as i got more into it the whole poem just started to take off! Excellent work! I really liked the very last lines.... they were so breath taking... and really left the reader with a gasp! Just a few things you might want to change

    Looking down...she sees the infinite abyss
    As she is thinking at his last icy kiss

    (You might want to make it.... "as she was thinking OF his last icy kiss"

    and here

    She is laying at the end of a cliff
    ( Edge might be a better word for end)

    Other than that great poetry and i'm
    definatly going to read more of your work!

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    This is really good it is full of emotions good write!
    Ashley

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