This is really good it is full of emotions good write!
Ashley

Amazing poetry! I Really liked this one... It had a rocky start but as i got more into it the whole poem just started to take off! Excellent work! I really liked the very last lines.... they were so breath taking... and really left the reader with a gasp! Just a few things you might want to change

Looking down...she sees the infinite abyss
As she is thinking at his last icy kiss

(You might want to make it.... "as she was thinking OF his last icy kiss"

and here

She is laying at the end of a cliff
( Edge might be a better word for end)

Other than that great poetry and i'm
definatly going to read more of your work!

Thanks so much 4 the comments..it means a lot to me...and also 4 the votes. I'm sry 4 the mistakes,it was kinda late and also,english is not my native language. Thx again 4 everything. Lotsa love 4 all of u