Comments : A Missed Prom

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Beautiful poem that came from something that must have felt so sad for her. This not only seemed to capture being lonely but also the feeling that you really would have been there if you could.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Awe thats so sweet! I knew tuns of girls who go stood up this year for prom, and i can't even imagine what they must have felt all dolled up and no date. The worest part was when our stupid principal didn't let them in without a date. I'm glad she has an awesomef friend like you to look out for her. Awesome poem for a heartfelt awesome writter

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem
    5/5
    pls r/r/c murder or suicide
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    A lovely poem!I wish all guys thought like you!It is true, your words are so beautiful!Please,write alot of more poems like that,i'd love to read more!Well done!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    A very nice dedication to your friend.
    It really does suck getting stood up.
    A close friend of mine was stood up at our prom, so I stuck with her for some of the night. Even danced with her. My date didn't mind. And I love her to death for that.

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Whatch out for the spelling of "elegant". You certainly sound a very supportive friend. I have a prom coming up which I am so excited about and I think you captured your friends sadness beautifully. Why is this a slang poem?

    [lost_laureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done. I loved the flow and the clear sad picture you painted for your readers. Your true emotions and the hidden love sips through the words... cleverly done. Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    I love the poem simply because it was from he heart. I like how you said you'd be there for her if it weren't for the mere fact you were far away. Beautiful write. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Felicia

    I like this poem... its really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This is a magnificent poem. I loved it. Its very well written and very heartfelt. The reader can actually feel the emotions you put in it, and really see the picture you painted. Excellent job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    I love it! it's soo cute good poem, it's very beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Such a sad beginning with a wonderfully loving twist to the end . Reminds me off my prom , my boyfriend and I broke up 1 week before and I had already spent alot of money on my dress which went unworn . Brought back memories of many , many years ago .18 years to be exact....lol
    A very touching write !

  • 18 years ago

    by beautyinainstant

    Great poem. i went to prom with my bf this year and this girls' date nvr showed up and it made me so sad cuz that could of been me. I wish i could of helped her but i couldnt i didnt know her..i didnt know anyone there. but great poem. ~valerie

  • 18 years ago

    by beautifultragedy

    Hey i really love this peom.. and it sounds really heartfelt...you should write more poems to this effect

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    Dang, that's a really good poem. Now that's love for ya.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    Thanks for the wonderful comments people. I do know her, she's a dear friend of mine. I'm in the service now and she moved to texas. I only wish she actually knew how badly I wish I could have been with her.

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Oh wow...this is sad! good flow...just over all very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa25

    Its awsome

  • 18 years ago

    by dijah

    Awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Standing Strong

    5/5 i htought it flowed great and all of it went together great.