by Kaylee
Beautiful poem that came from something that must have felt so sad for her. This not only seemed to capture being lonely but also the feeling that you really would have been there if you could. |
by Brigitte
Awe thats so sweet! I knew tuns of girls who go stood up this year for prom, and i can't even imagine what they must have felt all dolled up and no date. The worest part was when our stupid principal didn't let them in without a date. I'm glad she has an awesomef friend like you to look out for her. Awesome poem for a heartfelt awesome writter |
by amelia
Beautiful poem |
A lovely poem!I wish all guys thought like you!It is true, your words are so beautiful!Please,write alot of more poems like that,i'd love to read more!Well done!!!!! |
by Darien
A very nice dedication to your friend. |
Whatch out for the spelling of "elegant". You certainly sound a very supportive friend. I have a prom coming up which I am so excited about and I think you captured your friends sadness beautifully. Why is this a slang poem? |
by J Lau
Nicely done. I loved the flow and the clear sad picture you painted for your readers. Your true emotions and the hidden love sips through the words... cleverly done. Keep up the good work! 5/5 |
by Synh
I love the poem simply because it was from he heart. I like how you said you'd be there for her if it weren't for the mere fact you were far away. Beautiful write. 5/5 |
by Felicia
I like this poem... its really good |
This is a magnificent poem. I loved it. Its very well written and very heartfelt. The reader can actually feel the emotions you put in it, and really see the picture you painted. Excellent job! 5/5 |
by Sarah
I love it! it's soo cute good poem, it's very beautiful |
by Lu
Such a sad beginning with a wonderfully loving twist to the end . Reminds me off my prom , my boyfriend and I broke up 1 week before and I had already spent alot of money on my dress which went unworn . Brought back memories of many , many years ago .18 years to be exact....lol |
Great poem. i went to prom with my bf this year and this girls' date nvr showed up and it made me so sad cuz that could of been me. I wish i could of helped her but i couldnt i didnt know her..i didnt know anyone there. but great poem. ~valerie |
Hey i really love this peom.. and it sounds really heartfelt...you should write more poems to this effect |
by Catherine
Dang, that's a really good poem. Now that's love for ya. |
Thanks for the wonderful comments people. I do know her, she's a dear friend of mine. I'm in the service now and she moved to texas. I only wish she actually knew how badly I wish I could have been with her. |
by jello
Oh wow...this is sad! good flow...just over all very good |
by Lisa25
Its awsome |
by dijah
Awesome poem. |
5/5 i htought it flowed great and all of it went together great. |