Great write keep upt the wonderful write! and many can relate! 5/5
Ashley

Aw Steph =[ You're worth everything. Don't think your not okay, I really liked this poem. You expressed how you felt really clearly. Awesome job. You know im here if you need me.
Love taleeee xx

I lyk this poem, i feel the same way ... can we be friends?? and can u read my poems and comment them?? Plz!! w/b Love ya!! xoxoxo

Another 5/5! dont you get tired of them? lol only joking. i'm a complete fan now! i just can't stop reading your work. its fantastic. i can really identify.

Let me tell u something. your worth a lot. and thats the truth. id die for u...even though i dont know u. yer an amazing writter....another 5/5!

I fake the smiling,
While inside I'm dieing,
And on the inside I'm also crying,
I cut my wrist,
One deep slit down,
And the bloods going everywhere,
And I knew this time i was going to die

^^ That is SO me! Lol. I act like I'm the happiest person alive...and inside...i'm just...fading away. Good job of expressing your feelings! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

:O ouch, thats powerful writing. (you spelt knives as knices just so you can fix it babe) but its so strong and you aint ugly honey, this sounds like you have so low esteem which you shouldnt as your talent is very good and you should be proud of yourself. xxxxxxx