Comments : The World Is Not Right

  • 18 years ago

    by Symera

    I really like your poem even the dark elements of it that could bother me more intrigue me.

  • 18 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Wow....u finally cracked...

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Niiice poem Nick!! =] Loved it 5/5

    XxXN-G-C-SXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Tamra

    I really liked this one. I can kinda relate to what you're saying.. i think. lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Nice!!!
    God bless u

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Very Strong Emotion. You Have A Few Misspellings, But It's A Very Good Over All Poem.
    Heather

  • 18 years ago

    by intensions

    Crazy... you can feel the emotions in the words...

  • 18 years ago

    by Batman

    You want me to die?