Awwww...sorry!
I really like this poem!
I like the whole thing!
I give you a 5/5!
Nice work! Take care!
~*~Cindy~*~

Cute
Remember though, things need not always rhyme.
If something sounds better but does not necessarily rhyme, use it anyway.
It gives your writing a more sophisticated less "cute" feeling.

Keep up the good work. You'll do very well with your girlfriends if you keep on.